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- SKETCH - by oomizuao - SKETCH - by oomizuao
I didn't really plan to upload this... but I haven't posted anything here in a good while, or at least it feels like a long while, so I thought I'd upload the sketch of a drawing I want to color later. I only have Paint Tool Sai on my dad's computer, as it somehow won't allow photoshop to work.. And, sorry all you Sai fans, but I really don't like Sai.... It's great for sketching and lineart, but I personaly don't think the brushes for coloring are any good at all. (and yes I know I can download other brushes, but I still like Photoshop far better).


anyways..

I tried drawing in a sort of bird's eye view perspective on this one, but I suck.. so there are lots of flaws in this. I'll try to fix it..

I also really really want to try and paint this on a huge canvas and with acrylic paint when I have the time, and when I'm satisfied with this sketch. but... right now I have loads of other things to do. Like commissions. I need to finish them all before February 2012, because I decided I want to finish them by then. It's sort of a goal.



sorry, I'm babbling...


I'll scrap this later when it's been colored. Or earlier, I dunno.. XD



art and character (C) Elise M. Syvertsen / oomizuao 2011
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:iconcookie71266:
Cookie71266 Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2015  Hobbyist Interface Designer
Woah
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:iconcrissarain:
CrissaRain Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
its so cool! you're amazing >_<
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:iconxyro05:
xyro05 Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2013
Epic, this word isn't too much to express what i think about it!
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:iconrosekuran:
RoseKuran Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2013  Student Artist
This drawing reminds me of a novel I read recently in this book there were kids that were infused with dna. One of these kids was infused with wolf blood.. becoming what they called an erasers latter in the book it describes how the erasers were involved with eagle blood. The wings were wobbly and unstable. oh here i am babbling.

My complement to you. my only critique is to make the shoulders a bit wider and bring the neck into the head so the portions look right.
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:iconluna-y-amores:
Luna-y-Amores Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
hagsjgdjhgdakhkdajhj it's just kahskjhdkahgskagfkfg ♥.♥ :heart:
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:iconnatro267:
natro267 Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2012
Jeans, werewolf, angel wings. This drawing got it all!
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:iconkoolkid3:
koolkid3 Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
this look great :)
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:iconaurapower:
AuraPower Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
i hope i can draw as good as you one day
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:iconscottierouge:
ScottieRouge Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Such a georgous boy. <3
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:iconthe-doctor-094:
The-doctor-094 Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2011
I like your sketch but the problem is that it looks like he is famelic.
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:icongjwolf:
GJWolf Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
very nice
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:iconshockand-awe:
Shockand-Awe Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2011  Student General Artist
Great drawing, not so great perspective though ^^;
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:iconmaverik-soldier:
Maverik-Soldier Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Oh, my... that wings.
:heart:!
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:iconfiivanity:
FiiVanity Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2011
I really really like this! Cool perspective, cool wings... he his perfect :3
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:iconnemoxcvi:
NemoXCVI Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2011  Student General Artist
Anatomy is great, but if it's bird's eye perspective, might I suggest making it smaller from his waist to his feet?

I'm not a professional at all, but normally bird's eye focuses on one part in particular and kind of pans out the rest

I hope that helps, and this is beautiful sketch regardless
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:icongaurohtar:
Gaurohtar Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Very enthraling! Try to do a lil bit more perspective...think it would look awesome....even more than its already ;)
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:iconsorain26:
Sorain26 Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2011  Student General Artist
I think you did a good job on the perspective. The only thing I see wrong is his waist looks too small but that's just me. Love the detail.
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omgavegan Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
reminds me of the maximum ride erasers.
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:iconvoodoobizkit:
VoodooBizkit Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Love the wings mainly, great job on the pose n details as well^^
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:iconomittedforclarity:
OmittedForClarity Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
This id pretty hot.
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:iconcakepenguin:
CakePenguin Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2011  Hobbyist Artist
this looks really good! I cant draw wings (sad face) but yours are awesome!
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:iconviroxshadow:
ViroxShadow Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
It's amazing for just a try!
Don't be discouraged!
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:iconlonehanyo:
LoneHanyo Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2011  Student Traditional Artist
he's so skinny D= n yeah i do see some flaws... but they're barely noticable and i'm sure u'll be able to fix them.. it looks awesome... it just scares me how thin he is .__.
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:iconzeacorzeppelin:
ZeacorZeppelin Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2011  Student General Artist
Nice.
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:icondissension-7:
Dissension-7 Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2011  Student General Artist
Your art is so clean.
You're just awesome at anatomy!
I love his face, eyes and hair. :)
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:iconnya18:
Nya18 Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
it's a good try at perspective..im havin a hard time with it too

i love ur art style tho :3
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:iconfarrick:
farrick Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
this is amazing i love it
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:iconjackaloo:
Jackaloo Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2011   Digital Artist
I love how one wing is all "zomg make all the details!!!" and the other is like "asdfghjkl whatever". You funneh :dummy:
I like it just the way it is.
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DarkHolyMagic Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
The only thing that bugs be is his arm and the fact that you put the forearm in front of the upper arm, if you know what I mean :/ Otherwise I likes it o3o
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Forgotten94 Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2011   Digital Artist
really nice! :D
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KittenCruncher Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
The angle is good, but I think with a few adjustments it would look REALLY good.
If the legs were a tad longer, it would make everything look a bit more proportional. Also, the arms don't really fit into the perspective as well- if they taper off in size a little, it would look good too.
Just some friendly advice. C:
Other than that, this looks really nice. I love the way you draw wings.
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CrazyStrange Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Goodness Spike. Please eat a Burger. <3
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:iconluna777:
luna777 Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
i like the pose alot and the wings
amazing work there
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:iconcaninecrossover:
CanineCrossover Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Awesome! :D
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:iconkieshimoi:
KieshiMoi Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2011
Beautiful!
I'm looking forward to see it in color :)
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FoxWriter2 Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2011
Nice drawing! :)
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blackcandle-94 Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2011
awesome!
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Chadas23 Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2011  Student General Artist
Class
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Redrose-angel Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
thats awsome n hey ur a lot btr with the biirds eye view n perspective stuff than i am
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PIDKID Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
nice love his wings
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0Indigo0 Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Well, perspectives in aerial views are always hard, even in the basics. Practice will get you the hang out of it, it almost always does for everything.

But this... I really like it! Specially the facial expression and the eyes :heart:
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Braeus Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2011
I agree with a couple of people below. The size difference is not as gradual as it should be. It seems there are three distinct size blocks in this image; the legs and waist, the upper torso and shoulders, and the head. All are far larger than the preceding section and this is noticeable.

In the main, I think you have drawn this perspective for a much steeper angle than is actually the case. The angle itself is not very steep, yet you seem to be going for a 'birds eye view' that is intended to be viewed almost from directly above. As a result, the image looks distorted, as if being viewed through a convex lens.

I can imagine this is very hard. Keep your chin up, get a few references/tutorials, and have a few more goes, and no doubt you will master it!
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IDragonchiefI Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Looks really well...
Love the perspective. Nice job on the wings too :)
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VoiceOfVirtue Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
He always looks so hot... *melts in fangirlness* x3
The bottom half does look quite small, as someone else pointed out. Maybe it should get smaller more gradually, like an upside down triangle kinda thing. o.O
I really like the detail on the wings! They look so realistic and I just want to touch the feathers, and feel how silky they are. :)
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SnowLoveLeopard Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2011
Wow! This is really good! I wish I could draw wings like that... ^^
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BeaCJ96 Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2011
I don't know what can I say. Your pictures are always perfect. Is awesome. I love the wings and the perpective. Everything ^^
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Yuki1503 Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2011  Student General Artist
wow :omfg:, amazing :D
I love it, his expression on it's face and the wings :love:
(I love you're work)
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nightshadeniki Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2011  Student General Artist
I like it, although the bottom half perhaps looks a little too small in proportion to the top..? I know that it's the perspective, since you're viewing it from above and all and it may just need some shading to make it look right, but what do I know? It's still better than I could do! Keep up the great work =)
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LoveLess-Sacrifice Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2011  Student General Artist
beautiful, Moth, as always :D
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DamaiMikaz Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Wow! I love the many details you put in the wings. So awesome :D
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