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SPIKE - chapter 15 by oomizuao SPIKE - chapter 15 by oomizuao
chapter 15!
Because even though this one is quite the cliffhanger, I think it's less so than the previous chapter, and it just feels more right to stop at chapter 15 than 14..

And no, this isn't the end of the novel. I have more chapters, I just won't post them because I'm afraid someone will steal my novel. ^^;


And thanks a lot to all of my lovely readers! :') much love to you all!
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KaiTheBoy Featured By Owner 2 days ago  New member Hobbyist
you should keep posting on DeviantART, because everything posted is protected by a copyright ever since you post them.
Nuclermedia Featured By Owner Edited Jul 14, 2014  Hobbyist Filmographer
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Nuclermedia Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2014  Hobbyist Filmographer
Omfg!  I love this story, I am gonna DIE unless I read the entire thing!
nexadon06 Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
It's Impossible to steal something so original
tekk-the-killer Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2014
I hope this doesn't offend you but have you tried putting your story on wattpad? If not are you going to try to publish this story? If so that would be awesome cause I love this story so far.
Humphrey164 Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2014
No, you have to post them or do something with the chapters!   ...I want to finish the story. I just can't describe how I feel about the story. I love it so much. 
Adenars Featured By Owner Edited Jul 12, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
jag har läst kapitel 1-15 och jag tycker inte att du ska radera något, inte ens när vi får en inblick i chuck, inblicken skapar en intressant konflikt i läsaren.
"Han använder orden som jag skulle ha använt i ett helt annat sammanhang men inte till att beskriva relationen han har till spike", med andra ord knyter du läsaren lite mer till storyn ^^.  inblicken tar  död på det faktum att han blir mörkgrå istället för nattsvart i läsaren ögon, hade den "sidan" inte varit med tror jag att jag hade uppfattat honom som lite för mekanisk.

men iaf extremt intressant story, om du ger ut den som bok, serie eller vad som kommer jag att springa dit :), av den orsaken att din story känns unik.  jag lovar sällan men nu gör jag det: om du någonsin gör en kickstarter för att printa boken kommer jag att bidra, för första gången någonsin till en kickstarter

so I will be sitting on the edge my chair for more, I took it swedish mostly because i noticed you're a scandinavian ^^
LonerAsher Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2014  New member Hobbyist Interface Designer
I've read thousands of books, for entertainment, inspiration, homework, etc. But your book, idea,!!! <3 I've been up all nite reading this! U rlly r inspiring me to finish posting my book. But I'm with u for not posting the whole thing. My biggest fear is for someone to take my work and call it their own. Tht aside, I hope up get this published. Ur an Amazing author and dnt let anyone tell u otherwise.
Nulizz Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2014
I have read all of these and found myself wanting. I really do wish there were more chapters, but if this was out to be bought.. my paycheck at the end of the week will make me the happiest. @__@

You're an excellent Writer Oomizuao as well as you are an Artist. Thank you for putting out all of this for everyone to see.

Much love to you ma'am!
UnlovedandForgotten Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2014
This has been the best story I have ever read! You did an amazing job! Better than amazing!! I can't wait till its published. Do you have any idea when it will?? Sorry just cant help how amazing this story has been and wanting to read more!
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