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SPIKE - chapter 15 by oomizuao SPIKE - chapter 15 by oomizuao
chapter 15!
Because even though this one is quite the cliffhanger, I think it's less so than the previous chapter, and it just feels more right to stop at chapter 15 than 14..
kinda.

And no, this isn't the end of the novel. I have more chapters, I just won't post them because I'm afraid someone will steal my novel. ^^;


enjoy!

And thanks a lot to all of my lovely readers! :') much love to you all!
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Emocracy Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2016  New Deviant Hobbyist General Artist
So we may never see the last chapter D:
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M3MBluewolf Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2015  Student Photographer
At 1st I was like no just no... but it's true, if someone told me this was a true story I would believe them. It's a sick world. With this it's a real eye opener an the love I feel from the characters, and the story writing is writing is absolutely amazing. It kept me going, It raises the bar every chapter. Therefore very, very awesome work. I hope I, with so many here see more of this story line.
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happymonkey101 Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2015  New Deviant Hobbyist Writer
PLEASE CONTINUE i have to read more u can't leave me like this!
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Blake-Love-Yager Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2015  New Deviant
if you let anyone edit this do not let them edit your writing style that is perfect only let them edit the grammar and the spelling that is the only thing that is not perfect but everything about the way you write is perfect i can't wait for more 
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Blake-Love-Yager Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2015  New Deviant
omg omg omg i'm so killed by this is there an estimate on when the final copy will be out i'd gladly pay for it no matter how much it cost i just need this so bad i was at work today and i could only think about spike and sam i don't know how i could go without them having finished their story 
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thepickygamer217 Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2015  Student Writer
Loving this so far, PLEASE tell us when the novel is in its final stages, so we all can be prepared to hunt for it in the shelves of bookstores and the search bar of kindles. And I'll do that as soon as it comes out, because I DISLIKE CLIFFHANGERS!!!! Keep up the good work!
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jeff106 Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
I just read through the whole thing in an hour and a half. I need more.
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COOLP4TO15 Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
PLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEASE I READ ALL CHAPTERS IN 2 DAYS AND IT ENDS IN A CLIFFHANGER! I NEED TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS!
Real nice work,Clap  i cant wait for the book.I think I've fainted. 
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ArkarianXerxes Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2015
Just binged read all of this and i can safely say this is one of the best written pieces i have had the privilege to read. I'd love to know where you are in the writing and publishing stages. Can we expect a fully published book soon?
            -Ark.
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emil6969 Featured By Owner Oct 16, 2015
It is the best book i have read in my live
Please I want to know what will hapen next....
You can not end this book like that
I want to know the happy end
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE!!!!!
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raptorkil Featured By Owner Oct 4, 2015  Hobbyist Filmographer
I WILL WAIT ANOTHER EON TO BUY THIS BOOK.

<3

holy shit this is amazing

and that sad moment when you can relate to Spike 

fuck it

finish this XD
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MasterNekox Featured By Owner Sep 19, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
where can i find more novel to read ;w;?? 
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WelshCrevans Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2015
JK Rowling couldn't do it. Suzanne Collins couldn't do it. But you, you've done it...
You've made me not only feel emotion, but shed a tear for a character.
And he ain't even dead yet.
Well done, that's quite an achievement.
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danielfurrymatthews Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2015  New Deviant Hobbyist General Artist
I completely agree. I actually cried during the fallout ;(.
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stefalex1138 Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2015
Please finish soon! I'd like to know if spike goes back to chuck, or if he runs away!
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ArtboyI Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
*o* i wanna read more 

its awesome ^^ 
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NadiaWolf240 Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2015  Professional Digital Artist
Cliffhanger!!!!!
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shadowfang7890 Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
Question, this was uploaded it 2010 it says, when would you estimate the full story being available to us? I'd love to see how it ends, and how my otp turns out xD
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DemonRiderH Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
NOOOOO!... I was just getting into more yaoi and I thought of this , which I read a few months ago... I'm probably ganna read this another like 20 times or until more comes out
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Tryten46 Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2015
Damn this cliff hanger! Great work and hope to see more.
You know when you'll be posting more? Or still worried about someone stealing the novel?
Keep it up :)
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mrbloodbuck Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2015
When is this coming back? I cant wait to read more!
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c-seamk Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2015
Man I don't know how to react. Be side freak out just a little! What about spike, Marco's body was it discoveres? So many questions!
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Type1Apurplenova Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Ahh! So suspenseful, so sad, so deep. I hope you haven't lost interest in the story, cuz that would SUCK. What is this based on, if it is based on something?
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KokageIkeda Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I can't even begin to explain how amazing this story is and how much it has touched me. You're characters, plot, and writing style are all so good that I can't help but to get sucked right into the story. I'm hooked on it, and I don't ever want to stop reading. However, I have to because there are only fifteen chapters uploaded. I'm sure I speak for many others, as well as myself, when I say that the suspense is so strong that it's almost haunting, and I must read more. I understand that it's been a while since you last uploaded any chapters, and I'm wondering when you will do so again. Please add the rest of your wonderful story! I love it so much and need to find out how it ends. X)
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Jd94518 Featured By Owner May 27, 2015
PLEASE PUBLISH!
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leahWinchell Featured By Owner May 16, 2015  Student Traditional Artist
where can i read the rest?
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Volentro Featured By Owner May 17, 2015
You can't.. sadly. She stopped uploading chapters, she's afraid someone may steal it... But she's working on the book! 
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Reo-C-Ray-Racheal Featured By Owner May 8, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
While disappointed that the end was not made available here, the story was so far, immaculate.  In every possible way.  With well-developed characters and more internal conflicts between characters than I could possibly count.  Grammar and Mechanics were perfect, dialogue was natural and fluent.  I would honestly purchase the entirety of the novel if the entire thing is completed.

Beautiful work of literature indeed.
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Oceantrue Featured By Owner May 8, 2015
Hiya Oomizuao, I like everyone else love this novel! I saw this was uploaded in 2010, so I was wondering if you will begin releasing chapters again, or if you are waiting to publish the entire story? I am so sad now as you ended it where Spike and Sam are no longer friends :'(
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KaiTheBoy Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
WWWHYYYY I WANNA READ MORE PLEAAAASE I'M GONNA CRY I SWEAR I WILL
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VlkCZ Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2015
GUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUH COME OOOOOOON! this story is so touching and i love it, can't wait for more. Such cliffhanger.
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KuraiKurosawa Featured By Owner Edited Apr 5, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Well...I've finally finished the final chapter (that has been released so far on this) and well...i can't say much. I am quite jaw dropped and just angry on how there is just no more chapters being released (but that doesn't me i don't love your work ^^) Your story from beginning to end has been a great adventure for me as a person and for my emotions, as i can also related to spike a bit. In all other words i can't even describe how my emotions and feelings were when i finished this chapter and the whole story itself. i guess i can only suffer and wait like the rest of us ;-;. I hope you get this published soon, i can't wait for the full thing!
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NaughtyDoggy Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2015
id like to read all chapters you wrote! Please!!!!!!!!!
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Bu1lfr0g16 Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2015  Student Digital Artist
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH can i read it omg plz i want to find out wat happens PLZZZZZZZZZZZZZ!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Soulja-wolf Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
yepp.. there's the tears. shit. I need to read the rest ;-;
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Virensere Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Cliffhangerssssss

Damn astounding novel. I'm not a fan of reading, but this was freakin addicting.
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Halphyos Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2015  Student Traditional Artist
I am so addicted!! TT^TT it's so sad but im so addicted.
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ZitroneAaron42 Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2015
Amazing... just amazing.
AND SAD!
And it makes me wonder how many Chapters the full Novel will have.
Damn now i'l have to buy it...
Also i think your whriting is really good. :D
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KingSketcher Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2015
But where and when CAN one buy this comic?
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ZitroneAaron42 Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2015
I think its not done?
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KingSketcher Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2015
B-but, I needs it..
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KingSketcher Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2015
PLEASE!!
This is the best damn novel I've EVER read(And I read a lot)!
So PLEASE put up some more chapters, I MOST know happens to Spike and Sam, I've never felt so much reading anything before! PLEEAASE
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kamileradinaite Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I demand moooooore pleeeaaase dont leave it at such a cliffhanger i hope you find a way to post the rest or maybe release a book or something plus i love your art work and this novel and yh keep it up
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OrigamiOtter Featured By Owner Edited Dec 26, 2014
This is absolutely amazing, and I'm so sad to see it temporarily ended! I'm really excited for whenever you publish the rest of the novel, but I understand your concerns and wish you the best of luck. I know no amount of pleading will change your mind, but I'm dying in wait, so thanks for releasing the great work you have so far, and be sure to let us know when you continue. Happy Holidays! :3
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hyfoxide Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
So we have to wait for an actual book to be published.....
I can't wait to find out what happens to them ;n;
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Pete131 Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2014
It's been 4 years since I read this naval, every once in a while i would come back and check if it was updated. It never was. I am not angry or blaming anyone for this but i am just surprise of how much i like this naval even after 4 years. Well, i waited 4 years may be i can wait 4 more years. Until then, i will wait....  
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flyingstorm01 Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2014  Student General Artist
So awesome only u can'tvread the last chapter it won't let me
I wan to read it
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wolfyokai Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2014
i hope more chapters come!
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PossumTool Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2014  Student Digital Artist
Dette fikk øynene mine tårevåte.. noe så forferdelig, stakkars Spike.
Men det er en flott novelle, du har et fantastisk talent innenfor skriving og tegning. Det rørte opp så mange forskjellige følelser inne i meg og du tar opp et veldig seriøst tema. 
Fortsett med det (:
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LysonHeartToboe Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2014  Student Writer
IM CRYING! i have read all 15 chapters today! its so good :D you are brilliant! i hope to see more... it sucks that someone would try to steal your work :( i really want to find out what happends next but you rock! 
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