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SPIKE - chapter 15 by oomizuao SPIKE - chapter 15 by oomizuao
chapter 15!
Because even though this one is quite the cliffhanger, I think it's less so than the previous chapter, and it just feels more right to stop at chapter 15 than 14..
kinda.

And no, this isn't the end of the novel. I have more chapters, I just won't post them because I'm afraid someone will steal my novel. ^^;


enjoy!

And thanks a lot to all of my lovely readers! :') much love to you all!
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:iconamme-victoria:
Is this coming back? Its amazing :')
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:iconderpderpdeherp:
It doesn't seem right just to stop posting chapters and leave us hanging from a cliff.... D:
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:icon23awesome23:
Honestly this made me cry. Not on the outside, for some odd reason. This story really got me hard. This is so realistic to my life. How you like someone then love them and are not able to have them. Really great story, ill be waiting till you post the rest. c;
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:iconyougotpw3d:
Noooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!   i wanna know when this comes out!!!!!!! vabdslbvisldfflnLNCi!!!!!!!!
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zion-wolf Mar 13, 2014  New member
OMG OMG OMG PLEASE IF THIS IS A BOOK TELL ME WHERE I CAN FIND IT I WANT TO READ MORE
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:iconlybysilsa:
Ahhhh! I read all the chapters in one night, and now a cliff hanger? Come on life, why must you be so crule?!
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xZeroHero Feb 10, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Finally I read it completely! And I have to say, I've never read a book (or a novel), that packed me that much. There were sadness, fearness and happiness. I just couln't stop reading.
But why must you stop here? xD 
Well, however I'm exited on how it's going on (:
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Wasimu Jan 30, 2014  Student General Artist
I had to sit back and read this over again after feeling a bit down, and I can honestly say this is one of the few books that makes me feel the same way I felt the first time I read it. Excited, curious, sad, angry... I was looking forward to reading chapter after chapter even though I'd read it all before. I was so into it I read all fifteen chapters in one sitting :XD: It's so skillfully written it's insane. You have such an amazing talent for capturing emotions and making the reader feel exactly what the character feels. I seriously started crying so hard I had to stop reading for a few hours. The way you tackle the very serious issue of child abuse is so, so great.
I really wish you the best of luck in publishing this. It's an amazing story people outside of DeviantART also need to know. I know I won't even hesitate to buy it. You, your art and your book has really helped me through some really though times, and I can't thank you enough.

Thank you for making my days so much better :heart:
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Elkian-Wolf Jan 28, 2014  New member
Ahhh well, I guess it has to end somewhere. I was hoping to see the literal end though. Be it happy or sad, funny thing is as I've read through this I've noticed that things that happened to Spike would similarly happen to me a coincidental times. Under different terms of course, the only thing I can't say I relate to is the abusive uncle, my family loves me a lot. And the whole killing thing, yeah didn't do that either :/ Everything else is quite spot on, must say I'm really impressed with what this story had to offer. Its a shame that we won't see more to this or even see the end. Its almost as if this is the life I would live if I didn't get adopted...I looked up my uncle from Russia. Dmitri Zidkopf, jailed for drug possession and sexual assault. Of course the laws in Russia are different and he could pay a fine to get out. Other then that I know nothing more of them, I know my parents are most likely dead because I'm the 14th child and my oldest sibling is 31. I guess they had a weird way of making babies O_o
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adair408 Jan 22, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
BUT....BUT.....WHY MUST YOU STOP HERE?!

I just noticed it was 2:00AM.....I thought it was 11:00 PM........oops.
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