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SPIKE - chapter 15 by oomizuao SPIKE - chapter 15 by oomizuao
chapter 15!
Because even though this one is quite the cliffhanger, I think it's less so than the previous chapter, and it just feels more right to stop at chapter 15 than 14..
kinda.

And no, this isn't the end of the novel. I have more chapters, I just won't post them because I'm afraid someone will steal my novel. ^^;


enjoy!

And thanks a lot to all of my lovely readers! :') much love to you all!
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Blackmist-tailess Featured By Owner May 29, 2016
WHAT !!? NO ! I NEED TO KNOW THE END !!! 
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red-mohawk Featured By Owner May 25, 2016  Student General Artist
Are you going to redo the hospital scene? It has a few flaws. Like the fact he managed to get out without being detected.
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OliverRouge Featured By Owner May 17, 2016  New Deviant
I just stayed up till 1 in the morning ON A SCHOOL NIGHT to read this, and it ends like THIS?!?!?!!??! I will pay $100 for this book if you will PLEASE publish a book on this!!!! I'M DYING!!!! You can save a furry life if you publish a finished version of this novel!!!
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ForestGH123 Featured By Owner May 4, 2016  Student Traditional Artist
is there some where we can find it plz im not here to steal it is just so good i need to know what happens next 
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CoolStarRigel141102 Featured By Owner May 2, 2016  New Deviant
You are a great, very great, best writer ever. You have great talents, really. And also I love your novel. It really has strong emotions in it. Keep up the good work!

(And also, please post more of the chapters. I want to know what happens at the ending.)
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RemedysMelody109 Featured By Owner Edited Apr 7, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
OMG That was amazing! I love it! especially the twist he commited murder, that was interesting
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RWBY42 Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2016  Hobbyist
WHEN IS THIS GOING TO BE PUBLISHED?!?! I MUST READ MORE!!!
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furshadowhusk Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2016
Please, please, please continue... I'm literally begging for you to post more, this caught my eyes and heart so strongly. And in a way I can relate to the the novel, and I want more because... god I don't know, I need therapy now...
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WolfSlayer175 Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2016
your killing me, i need to know what happens!
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Skye227 Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
Ummm, how long do you think it will be before you get this published? This cliffhanger is killing me......
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NoticeForEnemies Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2016
Your novel gave me so much mixed feelings, I really want to know more. Do as you want, I'm a patient guy (a patient guy who need a therapy right now, after reading all of that ^_^) and I wish you to release your book when finished, because it is a beautiful (and sad) story and you're a good author. Your story is hurting me so much I think I haven't lunch on the last 48h but I don't care, I'm worried about Sam and Spike.

Good luck to you, and thank you for that story.
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papajack1 Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2016  Hobbyist Writer
You are an amazing writer. Really, truly, talented. And I really enjoy this book. I hope you publish soon so we can see the rest.

Damn, how long have you been practicing your writing?
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Emocracy Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
So we may never see the last chapter D:
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M3MBluewolf Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2015  Student Photographer
At 1st I was like no just no... but it's true, if someone told me this was a true story I would believe them. It's a sick world. With this it's a real eye opener an the love I feel from the characters, and the story writing is writing is absolutely amazing. It kept me going, It raises the bar every chapter. Therefore very, very awesome work. I hope I, with so many here see more of this story line.
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happymonkey101 Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
PLEASE CONTINUE i have to read more u can't leave me like this!
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Blake-Love-Yager Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2015
if you let anyone edit this do not let them edit your writing style that is perfect only let them edit the grammar and the spelling that is the only thing that is not perfect but everything about the way you write is perfect i can't wait for more 
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Blake-Love-Yager Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2015
omg omg omg i'm so killed by this is there an estimate on when the final copy will be out i'd gladly pay for it no matter how much it cost i just need this so bad i was at work today and i could only think about spike and sam i don't know how i could go without them having finished their story 
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thepickygamer217 Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2015  Student Writer
Loving this so far, PLEASE tell us when the novel is in its final stages, so we all can be prepared to hunt for it in the shelves of bookstores and the search bar of kindles. And I'll do that as soon as it comes out, because I DISLIKE CLIFFHANGERS!!!! Keep up the good work!
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jeff106 Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
I just read through the whole thing in an hour and a half. I need more.
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COOLP4TO15 Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
PLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEASE I READ ALL CHAPTERS IN 2 DAYS AND IT ENDS IN A CLIFFHANGER! I NEED TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS!
Real nice work,Clap  i cant wait for the book.I think I've fainted. 
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ArkarianXerxes Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2015
Just binged read all of this and i can safely say this is one of the best written pieces i have had the privilege to read. I'd love to know where you are in the writing and publishing stages. Can we expect a fully published book soon?
            -Ark.
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emil6969 Featured By Owner Oct 16, 2015
It is the best book i have read in my live
Please I want to know what will hapen next....
You can not end this book like that
I want to know the happy end
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE!!!!!
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raptorkil Featured By Owner Oct 4, 2015  Hobbyist Filmographer
I WILL WAIT ANOTHER EON TO BUY THIS BOOK.

<3

holy shit this is amazing

and that sad moment when you can relate to Spike 

fuck it

finish this XD
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MasterNekox Featured By Owner Sep 19, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
where can i find more novel to read ;w;?? 
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WelshCrevans Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2015
JK Rowling couldn't do it. Suzanne Collins couldn't do it. But you, you've done it...
You've made me not only feel emotion, but shed a tear for a character.
And he ain't even dead yet.
Well done, that's quite an achievement.
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danielfurrymatthews Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2015  Student General Artist
I completely agree. I actually cried during the fallout ;(.
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stefalex1138 Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2015
Please finish soon! I'd like to know if spike goes back to chuck, or if he runs away!
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ArtboyI Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
*o* i wanna read more 

its awesome ^^ 
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NadiaWolf240 Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2015  Professional Digital Artist
Cliffhanger!!!!!
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shadowfang7890 Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
Question, this was uploaded it 2010 it says, when would you estimate the full story being available to us? I'd love to see how it ends, and how my otp turns out xD
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DemonRiderH Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
NOOOOO!... I was just getting into more yaoi and I thought of this , which I read a few months ago... I'm probably ganna read this another like 20 times or until more comes out
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Tryten46 Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2015
Damn this cliff hanger! Great work and hope to see more.
You know when you'll be posting more? Or still worried about someone stealing the novel?
Keep it up :)
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mrbloodbuck Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2015
When is this coming back? I cant wait to read more!
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c-seamk Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2015
Man I don't know how to react. Be side freak out just a little! What about spike, Marco's body was it discoveres? So many questions!
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Type1Apurplenova Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Ahh! So suspenseful, so sad, so deep. I hope you haven't lost interest in the story, cuz that would SUCK. What is this based on, if it is based on something?
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KokageIkeda Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I can't even begin to explain how amazing this story is and how much it has touched me. You're characters, plot, and writing style are all so good that I can't help but to get sucked right into the story. I'm hooked on it, and I don't ever want to stop reading. However, I have to because there are only fifteen chapters uploaded. I'm sure I speak for many others, as well as myself, when I say that the suspense is so strong that it's almost haunting, and I must read more. I understand that it's been a while since you last uploaded any chapters, and I'm wondering when you will do so again. Please add the rest of your wonderful story! I love it so much and need to find out how it ends. X)
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Jd94518 Featured By Owner May 27, 2015
PLEASE PUBLISH!
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leahWinchell Featured By Owner May 16, 2015  Student Traditional Artist
where can i read the rest?
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Volentro Featured By Owner May 17, 2015
You can't.. sadly. She stopped uploading chapters, she's afraid someone may steal it... But she's working on the book! 
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Reo-C-Ray-Racheal Featured By Owner May 8, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
While disappointed that the end was not made available here, the story was so far, immaculate.  In every possible way.  With well-developed characters and more internal conflicts between characters than I could possibly count.  Grammar and Mechanics were perfect, dialogue was natural and fluent.  I would honestly purchase the entirety of the novel if the entire thing is completed.

Beautiful work of literature indeed.
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Oceantrue Featured By Owner May 8, 2015
Hiya Oomizuao, I like everyone else love this novel! I saw this was uploaded in 2010, so I was wondering if you will begin releasing chapters again, or if you are waiting to publish the entire story? I am so sad now as you ended it where Spike and Sam are no longer friends :'(
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KaiTheBoy Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
WWWHYYYY I WANNA READ MORE PLEAAAASE I'M GONNA CRY I SWEAR I WILL
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VlkCZ Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2015
GUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUH COME OOOOOOON! this story is so touching and i love it, can't wait for more. Such cliffhanger.
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KuraiKurosawa Featured By Owner Edited Apr 5, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Well...I've finally finished the final chapter (that has been released so far on this) and well...i can't say much. I am quite jaw dropped and just angry on how there is just no more chapters being released (but that doesn't me i don't love your work ^^) Your story from beginning to end has been a great adventure for me as a person and for my emotions, as i can also related to spike a bit. In all other words i can't even describe how my emotions and feelings were when i finished this chapter and the whole story itself. i guess i can only suffer and wait like the rest of us ;-;. I hope you get this published soon, i can't wait for the full thing!
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NaughtyDoggy Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2015
id like to read all chapters you wrote! Please!!!!!!!!!
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Bu1lfr0g16 Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2015  Student Digital Artist
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH can i read it omg plz i want to find out wat happens PLZZZZZZZZZZZZZ!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Soulja-wolf Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
yepp.. there's the tears. shit. I need to read the rest ;-;
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Virensere Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Cliffhangerssssss

Damn astounding novel. I'm not a fan of reading, but this was freakin addicting.
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Halphyos Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2015  Student Traditional Artist
I am so addicted!! TT^TT it's so sad but im so addicted.
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ZitroneAaron42 Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2015
Amazing... just amazing.
AND SAD!
And it makes me wonder how many Chapters the full Novel will have.
Damn now i'l have to buy it...
Also i think your whriting is really good. :D
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