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THIS IS THE EDITED VERSION OF CHAPTER 5!
The edit is minor, but still pretty important. I've changed the timeline, so this is all happening in the 80's, meaning that Terrance and Saunders actually were hippies back in the days
just wanted to change this now to avoid any confusion in the newer chapters. ^^
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I've felt so bad about not submitting any new chapters and keeping you guys waiting when I'm sitting here writing of chapter fricken 20...! So here it is, unedited, chapter 5!
I hope you like it
And sorry, Star-Seal for being impatient and not waiting for you to finish the editing... v_v *sad*
I just didn't want to disappoint my readers.
Also, sorry about the poor quality! DeviantArt refused to let me upload it when it was still 2,3 mb in size so I had to lower the quality so it wouldn't be such a big file... :C
Finally - a BIG thanks to:
- for all the help and support!
- for wanting to edit my story!
story and characters (C) Elise M.S. / Oomizuao 2009
The edit is minor, but still pretty important. I've changed the timeline, so this is all happening in the 80's, meaning that Terrance and Saunders actually were hippies back in the days
just wanted to change this now to avoid any confusion in the newer chapters. ^^
-------------------------------------------------------------------------
I've felt so bad about not submitting any new chapters and keeping you guys waiting when I'm sitting here writing of chapter fricken 20...! So here it is, unedited, chapter 5!
I hope you like it
And sorry, Star-Seal for being impatient and not waiting for you to finish the editing... v_v *sad*
I just didn't want to disappoint my readers.
Also, sorry about the poor quality! DeviantArt refused to let me upload it when it was still 2,3 mb in size so I had to lower the quality so it wouldn't be such a big file... :C
Finally - a BIG thanks to:
- for all the help and support!
- for wanting to edit my story!
story and characters (C) Elise M.S. / Oomizuao 2009
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© 2009 - 2024 oomizuao
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Im way too engrossed in this story, this, this is amazing holy shit!!