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SPIKE - chapter 8 by oomizuao SPIKE - chapter 8 by oomizuao
Here it is! chapter 8!
Chapter 9 is a one-pager, so I'll submit that maybe today, if not then at least next week.
Well, I'm off to eat lunch :3 I hope you'll enjoy the chapter even though the last part is ... well... nasty, for the lack of better words.









story and characters (C) Elise Marie Syvertsen / Oomizuao 2010
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:icontheshadowofnothing:
TheShadowofNothing Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Poor Spike...
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:iconsoulja-wolf:
Soulja-wolf Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
uuuuuugh my hand bleeds for his head on a plate.
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:iconkingsketcher:
KingSketcher Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2015
Catching story, but man, do I feel like letting some Chuck steam off on some f'ing pedo!
FINDING REAL INVENTIVE WAYS OF KILLING THAT F*CKING DICKHEAD!
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:iconproningtiger:
Proningtiger Featured By Owner Oct 31, 2014  Hobbyist
I want want chuck to be killed with the preferred method of the Vietcong, tying the person over a newly planted bamboo shoot and have it grow through him. Man he deserves at least 5 of those.
But i do like the story so far its very good i am am going to read the other parts in a fast manner. 
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:iconblake-shade:
Blake-Shade Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Why do i keep reading? It's so traumatic.
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:iconnadiawolf240:
nadiawolf240 Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Lol ikr? It is just so horrifying and sick and demented that I can't pull my self away from reading it!!!! I DONT UNDERSTAND WHY!?!?!?
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:iconoftheblessed:
OfTheBlessed Featured By Owner Oct 28, 2013
It would be more grammatically correct if you typed "He looked just like he had" rather than "He looked just like he'd done"  when referring to Saunders' appearance.
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:iconalice1236:
Alice1236 Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2013  Student General Artist
Oh, my good. D:
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:iconshadamy06:
ShadAmy06 Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Straightjacket....... HMPH! No problem! very easy to get out of. For me, that is. I can dislocate my shoulder.
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:iconwolfofthemoons:
WolfOfTheMoons Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
D':>
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:iconskimlet:
Skimlet Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconcryforeverplz:
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:iconautisticicelandic98:
AutisticIcelandic98 Featured By Owner May 1, 2013
f*ck, this is the worst uncle ever!
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:icon14142000:
14142000 Featured By Owner Feb 27, 2013  Student Filmographer
And this is why i don't do bondage, brings back bad memories
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:iconowlflight222:
owlflight222 Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Oh crap poor Spike.Chuck has a straight jacket now.I feel bad for Spike.
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:iconsk8erchick21:
Sk8erchick21 Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconcryforeverplz:
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:iconangel-moonlight:
Angel-Moonlight Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Straightjacket... my face looked like this --> o.o
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:iconrockstarhinata:
Rockstarhinata Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2012   Digital Artist
ive never had this much trouble reading something, but this is so good. :(
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:iconowlsandcupcakes:
OwlsAndCupcakes Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2012
a...straight jacket?
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:iconclefspeare1993:
clefspeare1993 Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2012  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
this is the most dismal part of the whole story! I am so glad that you are writing this though! people need to know that stuff like this happens everyday! I am definitely keep an eye out for the warning signs!
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:iconimrandomartist:
ImRandomArtist Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2012
chuck.................. burn in hell you SICK *****.......................................... srry but hes very............. urg........ can't even say it..........
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:iconthewhitejewel:
TheWhiteJewel Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2012
Oh no. Spike better learn how to dislocate his shoulder and back to get outta that straightjacket. Those things TERRIFY me.
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:iconshadamy06:
ShadAmy06 Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I can do that. Piece of cake. Very painful though.
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:iconthewhitejewel:
TheWhiteJewel Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2013
Geesh. I wouldn't be able to. I'd be screwed.
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:iconshadamy06:
ShadAmy06 Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
XD I'm just kidding! I'd be screwed too!
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:icontalkerwolf:
Talkerwolf Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2012  Student Writer
I'm really scared
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:iconmooncat1992:
mooncat1992 Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2012  Student General Artist
0.0 straight jackets are scary!! My uncle can get out of them easily.....>.>
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:iconspark1919:
spark1919 Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2012  Hobbyist
shaunders rocks. man I wish may dad was like that.
and about Chuck..... well I think I've made up a thousand fery unplesant deaths for him
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:iconshadamy06:
ShadAmy06 Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Was drowning in boiling water one of them?
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:iconspark1919:
spark1919 Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2013  Hobbyist
I was thinking of oil or tar
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:iconshadamy06:
ShadAmy06 Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
OOH! How bout quicksand that ian't really that quick
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:iconspark1919:
spark1919 Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2013  Hobbyist
how about impalement?
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:iconshadamy06:
ShadAmy06 Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
ouch. ok you beat me. you got the sloest most painful death.
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:iconspark1919:
spark1919 Featured By Owner Aug 27, 2013  Hobbyist
what can I say. I'm a life long fan of Vlad the impaler.
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:iconshadamy06:
ShadAmy06 Featured By Owner Aug 27, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Who's that? no don't tell me I don't want to know.
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:iconthespartanpenguin:
thespartanpenguin Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2012
if fact where fiction and fiction fact i would find the trill to the house blokc the doors and burn it down while spike was out that is
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:iconorangethemutt:
OrangetheMutt Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Daugh god
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:iconkaleidoscopic-nymph:
Kaleidoscopic-Nymph Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I can't stop reading, what have you done to me? :P
HIS UNCLE IS DISGUSTING UGHHHH ;_;
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:iconrodobin1337:
Rodobin1337 Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2012  Student General Artist
Yea, Chuck is a huge sick fuc... he deserves the most cruel death and most cruel afterlife possible.
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:iconshadamy06:
ShadAmy06 Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Like this right: Beaten slowly to death and in the afterlife he's one of those kids that gets molested.
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:iconkaleidoscopic-nymph:
Kaleidoscopic-Nymph Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconagreeplz:
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:iconyellow-eyes25:
Yellow-eyes25 Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2012  Student Photographer
Omg we're two
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:iconlydiavaldez26:
lydiavaldez26 Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
my thoughts exactly O.o
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:iconhanitaafu:
hanitaafu Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2012  Student General Artist
You are such a great artist and writer! :)
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:iconaluciathewolf:
AluciaTheWolf Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2011
Everytime Chuck goes all up on poor Spike, it hurts me. ;-; Dx
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:iconjroy101:
jroy101 Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
this story is excellent. it's inspiring. are the characters humans in the novel form or furries like in the pictures?
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:iconseadragon123:
seadragon123 Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
they're humans. i was wondering that too though
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:iconsolitarygraywolf:
SolitaryGrayWolf Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
they are humans in the novel, but she draws them as anthros.
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:iconparpar133:
parpar133 Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2011
The cherry flavored joke made me laugh :)
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:iconsuzy-ane:
Suzy-Ane Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2011  Student General Artist
"Shudders." Mai gosh. I wanna break into their house steal Spike, lock the doors and windows, break out the kerosene, burn the house down [Chuck inside it], take Spike to my place, give him food, take him shopping, be careful not to hug him, and give him a dA so he can post his art. Then hunt down anybody who posts a negative comment on it/threatens him in school. Oh, and compliment his eyes every day.
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GaucherieGhost Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
If only there was a button to "like" a comment..
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