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- Think you can beat me? - by oomizuao - Think you can beat me? - by oomizuao
"I can't beat up a girl...!"
Lillith: "Yeah, I don't think you can either."


I've changed Lillith's role in the Spike story again. I've been doing some thinking, and after a chat with JuliePig we both agreed that it would be way better if Lillith didn't just exist in the story for the sake of being someone's love interest.
I want her to be more in-character, to be the tough, independent young woman she is. She'll still be sweet and kind and stuff, but she's also got the ability to kick some ass. Quite literally. I've decided to give her a hobby besides listening to music: kick boxing.

I have a lot planned out for this, and it just fits perfectly with everything in the story.
I won't make Lillith a mary sue though..! She's not going to be flawless or win every match or junk like that. She'll just be a Lillith who's able to fend for herself, you know?
Gosh, I'd love to tell you everything I've planned for her, including her friendship/rivalry with Spike, and just.... I've made some big changes to the Spike story this week, and now everything just fits, you know? :D
And I'm excited and ready to start writing the whole thing now. I've got 90% planned out, for real this time. Everything fits nicely together now, and all there is to it really, is writing it all in chapter form...! :D
I'm just too busy to find proper time to just write. Because I know once I start writing, I won't be able to stop before I've almost finished the story..! So I'm thinking that from the end of May and throughout the summer, I want to spend a lot of time writing :la:

So I hope that's some exciting news..? :3

Anyways, a little teaser for you here..

kick-boxing Lillith, everyone! XD

art and character (C) Elise M. Syvertsen / oomizuao 2014
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derpderpdeherp 3 days ago  New member
Awesome!! Can't wait for the rest of the story to be published!
wolfin22 Mar 21, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
i cloud beat her X3
BlackFOXofficial Mar 8, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
This art is awesome! :) It's a good idea with a kick-boxing, but it is better not to do it so muscular ;)
RichTheWolf257 Mar 1, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Very yes.
Nightcat1445 Feb 28, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
So does this mean that Delyth role is changing too? or is she not going to exist anymore?
oomizuao Mar 1, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I'm not sure what to do with Delyth, really... o.o  Because, yes, her role might have to change a bit. So, I'm gonna have to think about that... ^^;
But thanks for your concern! :) it's nice to see she's actually remembered ^u^
It surprises me that people would think her being able to defend herself would change her character...seeing as know...that whole post apocalyptic zombie hunter...thing!
Shiito-kun Feb 25, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Beautiful >3<
catshe Feb 23, 2014  New member Student Digital Artist
I'm so happy you're excited! 
She looks kinda manly here XD
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