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- Think you can beat me? - by oomizuao - Think you can beat me? - by oomizuao
"I can't beat up a girl...!"
Lillith: "Yeah, I don't think you can either."

:p

I've changed Lillith's role in the Spike story again. I've been doing some thinking, and after a chat with JuliePig we both agreed that it would be way better if Lillith didn't just exist in the story for the sake of being someone's love interest.
I want her to be more in-character, to be the tough, independent young woman she is. She'll still be sweet and kind and stuff, but she's also got the ability to kick some ass. Quite literally. I've decided to give her a hobby besides listening to music: kick boxing.

I have a lot planned out for this, and it just fits perfectly with everything in the story.
I won't make Lillith a mary sue though..! She's not going to be flawless or win every match or junk like that. She'll just be a Lillith who's able to fend for herself, you know?
Gosh, I'd love to tell you everything I've planned for her, including her friendship/rivalry with Spike, and just.... I've made some big changes to the Spike story this week, and now everything just fits, you know? :D
And I'm excited and ready to start writing the whole thing now. I've got 90% planned out, for real this time. Everything fits nicely together now, and all there is to it really, is writing it all in chapter form...! :D
I'm just too busy to find proper time to just write. Because I know once I start writing, I won't be able to stop before I've almost finished the story..! So I'm thinking that from the end of May and throughout the summer, I want to spend a lot of time writing :la:

So I hope that's some exciting news..? :3

Anyways, a little teaser for you here..

kick-boxing Lillith, everyone! XD



art and character (C) Elise M. Syvertsen / oomizuao 2014
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4n1me-Art1st Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2014
Why does she remind me of my friend a bit scary but still she does look beautiful in this and the anatomy is brilliant
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Whetsit-Tuya Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2014  Student Filmographer
Yes
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saxumsando Featured By Owner May 18, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
sexy cat-girl :D (Big Grin) 
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Cyntrix-GM Featured By Owner May 7, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Well, I personally think you certainly improved and developed Lilith more. I for one, don't really like it when a characters existence is just to be a love interest. Then I feel the characters place in the story is unnecessary/unneeded. That it could carry on without them being missed. So, I'm very glad to see you made Lilith an independent character! Not to mention her physique is quite intriguing in a positive way (not in a perverted way, mind you). 

Job well done, and It's good to hear you're excited! Keep it up! :hug:
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MikeyAnthroVulupin Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2014
I'd love to see her give Spike some fighting tips so they could tag-team and beat the living crap out of Charles.
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derpderpdeherp Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2014
Awesome!! Can't wait for the rest of the story to be published!
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wolfin22 Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
i cloud beat her X3
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BlackFOXofficial Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
This art is awesome! :) It's a good idea with a kick-boxing, but it is better not to do it so muscular ;)
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RichTheWolf257 Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Very yes.
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Nightcat1445 Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
So does this mean that Delyth role is changing too? or is she not going to exist anymore?
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